Shyin Long, aka Ice, is discussing her newest target over the phone with her wingman Clyps: (Taken from the 0.99 novel Murder Creek available at Amazon and Barnes and Noble)
“He always waited three weeks after the third murder. It’s time. He’ll be coming back to Third, trust me.”
She didn’t.
“‘For God so loved the world that he gave his only begotten son’…”
H--wha? “Did I just blink and you found Christ?”
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22 comments:
Spooky. She doesn't trust him and he's quoting bible verses? Just in time for the end? :) Great six.
lol great last line. awesome 6!
Bizarre turn of events. Great six.
very curious indeed
I like the humor response. Great SSS.
lol so funny - and yet scary. Excellent job!
LOL, and a perfect post since the world supposedly ended yesterday.
Ooh, intriguing and a little chilling. Nice, creepy six!
Suspenseful!
The elements of intensity and humor are terrific, Allure.
She doesn't trust her wingman? Uh-oh. Maybe he'll get raptured!
So ominous, especially when he starts reciting scripture. Nice six!
Suspenseful and creepy. Well done.
Three's a powerful number. Don't mess with the Trinity! lol Intriguing six.
oooohhhh, you've got me intrigued.
Yeah, the last line makes this six perfect.
Okay, that's not the kind of thing I'd like to hear from my wingman in that situation. Unsettling.
Non sequiter tilted me off balance -- and I love that! Good job.
Here's mine: Sandy's Six
And I meant to say THANK YOU for commenting on my blog too!
Love the last line! Great six!
love that last line.
wow--very intriguing!
great six
liz
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