Sunday, May 22, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday Lovin'

Shyin Long, aka Ice, is discussing her newest target over the phone with her wingman Clyps: (Taken from the 0.99 novel Murder Creek available at Amazon and Barnes and Noble)

“He always waited three weeks after the third murder. It’s time. He’ll be coming back to Third, trust me.”

She didn’t.

“‘For God so loved the world that he gave his only begotten son’…”

H--wha? “Did I just blink and you found Christ?”






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22 comments:

writeintention said...

Spooky. She doesn't trust him and he's quoting bible verses? Just in time for the end? :) Great six.

Sandra Sookoo said...

lol great last line. awesome 6!

Jenna Jaxon said...

Bizarre turn of events. Great six.

sue said...

very curious indeed

Cherie Marks said...

I like the humor response. Great SSS.

Chrystalla Thoma said...

lol so funny - and yet scary. Excellent job!

Marie Dees said...

LOL, and a perfect post since the world supposedly ended yesterday.

Monica Enderle Pierce said...

Ooh, intriguing and a little chilling. Nice, creepy six!

KarennaC said...

Suspenseful!

charmainegordon author said...

The elements of intensity and humor are terrific, Allure.

Taryn Kincaid said...

She doesn't trust her wingman? Uh-oh. Maybe he'll get raptured!

Jessica Subject said...

So ominous, especially when he starts reciting scripture. Nice six!

Jessica K said...

Suspenseful and creepy. Well done.

Cate Masters said...

Three's a powerful number. Don't mess with the Trinity! lol Intriguing six.

therese gilardi said...

oooohhhh, you've got me intrigued.

Lindsay said...

Yeah, the last line makes this six perfect.

J.A. Beard said...

Okay, that's not the kind of thing I'd like to hear from my wingman in that situation. Unsettling.

Sandy Nachlinger said...

Non sequiter tilted me off balance -- and I love that! Good job.
Here's mine: Sandy's Six

Sandy Nachlinger said...

And I meant to say THANK YOU for commenting on my blog too!

Sarah Grimm said...

Love the last line! Great six!

Jayel Kaye said...

love that last line.

Liz said...

wow--very intriguing!
great six
liz