Sunday, May 8, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday #3 for me!

If You're interested in reading more than just bits and pieces of this scene, look to the Sample Sunday post below this one. Otherwise, here's the continuation of Shy's (a.k.a. Ice's) introduction.

“He’ll show up, Ice,” Clyps said, trying to convince her over the phone. “The police haven’t cracked his pattern but I have. Father John picks the girls from three different streets: Third, Main, and Sixth.”

“And that means what?” She looked over her shoulder, noticing a couple of the hookers shifting closer to her. “Damn, this could get ugly. If they’re enhanced--I’m fucked.”

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Chrystalla Thoma said...

Cool snippet - and what does she mean by "enhanced"? I'm hooked!

Vegetarian Cannibal said...

"Enhanced"? what does that mean? I'm intrigued and I want to know more. Nicely done, chica!

Jessica K said...

Wonderful scene-setting. Wow.

J.A. Beard said...

Enhanced? I see, lot more going on here than I suspected. Nice.